Shackled by faith, bound by respect,
Love is a barbed fence
You see your sky of freedom, limitless and inviting
Can an emotion be so strong, that you forget your bloodied wings
and everytime you see beyond, you flutter them again,
just to get pulled to bits by a thousand loving hands.
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Uninterrupted black nights, the stars dare not shine...All I can do is write...
3 comments:
hey Ruj,
Nice to see you blogging again. Went through your posts, keep writing, your writing reflects you very well, so keep at it!
By the way, for the poem, just was wondering if you want to replace "hands" with "winds" at the end - it really rhymes. Check it out.
S
hey thanks Sreeja, its more in the context of loved ones ....so I kept hands....I know it doesnt rhyme though :(
good one!
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